|The O and Q could be a little wider. The stem of Y could be shorter in relation to the top.|
Light-ish Roman, at 12 pen widths tall, lies somewhere between heavy Roman that is 5 pen widths tall (July 10) and very light Roman that is 16 pen widths tall (March 28). It's light but not gravity-defying.
Like other light versions of familiar scripts, there's nowhere to hide. You have to get the lines straight, make the corners square, and keep your hand steady.