This design is based on a simple declaration of love that reappears throughout the Song of Solomon; each lover belongs to the other, equally. Different translations offer different phrasing; I chose one that lets the speaker be either a he or she, in love with either a him or her, rather than restricting it to only a young woman in love with a young man.
The verse that follows this declaration adds a passage about how the lovers will meet when the shadows lengthen and the air is cool. At first I pictured this as lighted area surrounded by a soft shadow, so I set the large text inside a gray border, and wove the smaller letters between the main words in gray ink. It felt done.
AND THEN... Calligraphy designs usually resolve themselves into one definitive version. But after I thought about this one for a few weeks, I tried a slightly different take, where the lines that describe the slanting light, are set at a slant themselves.
In the redesign, I also changed the background of the miniature vignette, to show the mountains that the gazelles might have come from. I like them both.
Really very nice, and so good to hear (read) the thought processes behind the designs.
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